Breaking Inside

• Artist: Silvar_sigrund
• Description: something i wrote on the night of Apr 3rd 2011 because of things going on between me and my ex-fiancée. Rate/comment
• Date: 04/04/2011
• Tags: breaking inside

The Light is fading away
My hope is dreams dying
That which makes me fight eternity
Is lost and gone forever from me
My heart is broken inside
The soul giving me life, gone
Tears rolls down my cheeks
Night after night burning
Never ending never stopping
Always thinking only a memory
She is nothing less then everything
All I ever truly wanted is her
I pushed her away into pain
Hurting her like no other
I hate myself now for that
At my side is where i want her
But now I stand alone
Breaking Inside as i die
No words can say what i feel
For she was a love i never knew
Nor ever will know anew
I am so very sorry

Comments

[Polly Odd]

It's good.
Still, you shouldn't have lied to her.
You may have to give her some time to heal herself.
In that time, you need to heal, too, and move on.

[Maria J Harper]

Ok, I'll give you a break 'cause you were affianced, but continue to feel like that for an unhealthy period of time and I will have to tell you to GET THE HECK OVER IT!!!