Distance Lyrics

• Artist: Shiorins
• Description: I wrote a song called Distance...
  this is my second crack at writing lyrics.. so i'm not that good yet >///<
  So please give me all the constructive Critism[sp?] you can give!
  I won't be offended as long as it helps ^^
• Date: 06/08/2011
• Tags: distance lyrics

I wish
Upon a star
To see your face
To be at your place
Everything reminds me of you
Your laugh your smile
And all the while
I miss you

Travel by train
Travel from far
To any place you are
I want to be with you
Fly by plane
Close the distance
So I can finally
Be with you

Look at the stars
They are… my heart
Can you see the moon?
It’s how I watch over you
For I…
I miss you

Travel by train
Travel from far
To any place you are
I want to be with you
Take a step
Close the distance
So I can finally
Be with you

Life is unfair
To keep us apart
My loneliness
Is killing me
I need to close the distance
Distance

Travel by train
(Far)
To anyplace you are
I want to be with you
Fly by plane
(Distance)
So I can finally
I can finally
Be with you.

Comments

[Sincerely Metalhead]

Eh, not bad. Kinda cliche, but it isn't bad. Take it from a lyricist.