Feel like death

• Artist: Kumaneko88
• Description: Wrote this when I was Sick with a cold one dreadful day.
  
• Date: 06/17/2012
• Tags: cold

I'm laying on my death bed.

My life is chopped into four hour intervals....
I lay unconscious for three hours "healing" and recovering from this attack on my body,
and in the fourth hour I wake. I look around my bedroom and see dozens of little discarded puff tissues.
They are dramatically white and remind me of death lilys...

I am drowning, there is something evil inside my lungs.
and in this hour I choke and cough, praying to purge it from my weakened body.
It seems like an eternity.
Twenty more minutes and I can take another dose of freedom
from this pain, from this battle against...

the common cold.

Comments

[Holy N1qqa]

this might seem unsophisticated but i thought it was awesome :3

[Karmmalee]

love it!(:

[Kumaneko88]

Thank you so much! It means a lot to me

[VaLE3rIa]

I was holding my breath of suspense then when you said "the common cold", i let it out and laughed... well done, love the delivery 5/5