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I wait For that time to come (just a poem i came up with) I wait for the day someone tells me i'm pretty. I wait for the day that someone tells me they care. I wait for the day that i am not alone I wait for the day I am loved. As i wait and time passes I watch as Life goes on without me while i sit and wait for that time to come. I would like to know if it was bad good or ok for first try?

Posted by: Pimpin Puppyluv- Wed May 30, 2007 @ 06:47pm

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Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 12:02am


	surprised eek woah! i didn`t know you were good at porty thats was good pup-chan! smile

Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 02:47am


	Wow thats really good biggrin

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Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 03:23am


	that's really good! you ARE loved! even if you don't know it! and even if it's just for a poem!

Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 11:16pm


	i think it was ok for a first try but i dont recomend that as your muse it can lead to frustrations in the future

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Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 11:22pm


	B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!! Especially for a first time. I love free-verse poems (gosh I sound like such a dork). lol. Well your very talented in writing. 3nodding

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 12:16am


	Yet again, it's repetitive. Life does go on, and you're with it.

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:24am


	it was repetative, but sometimes, that can make a good poem. i think line 5 could have been added to line 4. that would have made it look better.

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 03:34am


	i like this poem also! it reminds me of somany other ppl i know.

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 03:35am


	This one's pretty good too. Kuddos.

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 08:05am


	This is okay............

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 06:28pm


	i think it's good, i write poemes 2! ^_^

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 08:29pm


	Very shallow in my opinion.

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