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A new poem! I can't let go I can't let go that you left me alone. I can't let go how bad you hurt me. I thought you would always be there for me, but when i pick up the phone and remember that you will not be there to answer the pain hurts so much but all i could do is hide it, no one to talk to, no one to listen, all i can do is keep it down bottled up. I can't let go that you left me alone. I can't let go how bad you hurt me, but as life goes on I will one day forget you and as much as it hurts to say it I can't wait for that day to come.

Posted by: Pimpin Puppyluv- Thu May 31, 2007 @ 10:20pm

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Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 10:46pm


	_ biggrin i`m addicted to your poems now! i expcet more in the furture got it!

Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 10:56pm


	your poems are awesome!

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Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 11:24pm


	Preech it gurl! lol. Wow I loved this one too, very sad yet powerful! -iheartnoodles

Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 11:40pm


	if i would be so bold as to critique i'd rate it 6/10...but good^^

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Commented on: Thu May 31, 2007 @ 11:45pm


	NICE I love it ^_^

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 12:13am


	You need to put more words in, rather than having 'I can't let go' all the time. It gets too monotonous after the first 2 times you see it. Work on your structure.

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 12:52am


	NO

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 01:55am


	Good, Nice job ♥♥♥

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:20am


	this wa sinteresting. it could have been better, but it could have been worse too. in some parts it didn't flow right, but nice idea.

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:49am


	It was pretty good but I thouhgt poems rhymedO_o http://athystory.webs.com

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 03:34am


	It's alright...It could use some tweaking though, sorry.

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 08:07am


	This ones okay............

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 06:31pm


	That was good 2!!

Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 08:28pm


	Another unorignal poem. D: I want something that will shock me or arouse my thought. None of this stuff which you slapped together.

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Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 08:47pm


	omg ur poems r good!

Commented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 06:41pm


	i cant let you go eather!!!!!!!!!!!!! crying

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