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My life for real and on gaia
This is all about me and how my real life is and my gaia life
This was my very first poem
What makes me different?


What makes me different from everyone else?
Is it because i wear different cloths and do not follow what's
In and what's out?
Or is it because i see the world from a different perspective ?
Or maybe it's because I say what's on my mind and do not smile and try to hide it.
I am different 'cause i am me,
and being me is what being free is all about.
This is what makes me different from everyone else.

Yep this was my very first poem. So what did you think?






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star sorbet
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 07, 2007 @ 06:16pm
I love this poem, it has a very godd point to it. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 08:34am
this reminds me of me biggrin



Umerez
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o-Kikumaru-o
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 10:55pm
It's a good poem.


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 10, 2007 @ 04:42pm
You did good and since its the you first poem you wrote I'd say you started at a good point!



shigatsu_rain
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courtneynnc
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 14, 2007 @ 01:47am
wow thats a good poem ive been writing poems 4 a couple of years and for your 1st one its fricken awsome it gave me that deep feeling that you get from a touching poem keep on writing i have a good feeling about you


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 01:30am
SO CUTE! i love being different! besides, i know im different. i just know im not related to my little brother...



Pandah Luv
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schuman
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 31, 2007 @ 08:42pm
i luff it!


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