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DEATH

Defying explanation,
Like wraiths
It takes form
Created from the shadows of souls,
Brought by the blood
That boils within
It creeps slowly
As surely coming
As the sun shall fade away
It deceives,
Escaping from its fiery prison
Held back by the undead
To come forth into a world
Where souls are susceptible to lies,
Where fear is its weapon
And darkness is its shield,
Where all that matters is
Whe overtaking of life,
To conquer, to conjure,
To conform,
It summons the light
Out of glowing bulbs
Wnd with a quick deception it overcomes life,
Sickening, Seducing,
Intiguing,
Writhing upon those
Who can't survive themselves,
Its ummons, calls,
Sweetly beckoning to unexpecting wonderers,
And then trapping them in
The coils of its lifeless
And unending jaws of death
For Eternity.






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The Real Crimson Wolf
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 06, 2007 @ 09:19am
Very cynical. Are all your poems like that? Not that I don't like it, but it does seam a little overdone. Still, it's better than most could do. I don't know why but I sometimes find it hard to pay attention when I read your poems. There definitely not boring. I just don't know. Anyway, keep up the good work.


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 06, 2007 @ 11:06pm
Your are an awesome poet!Wow.Love your poems.



Wasteland-xx
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