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Hero's Story
A great mystery in the kingdom of Eld. This is the story of Maru a doctor in Eld and a girl he is charged to take care of. A shadow lingers in the streets of Eld and a mysterious illness strikes the world. Can Maru figure out the mystery before the w
Chapter 1: The beginning
30 years later....

One sunny morning in the southern capital Eld. Hey Maru wake up were gonna miss it!!!

"Stop tickling me Kari im up im up," said Maru angryly. Maru walks toward the mirror. "So what boring thing do we have to do now Kari," asked Maru?

"You know, we have to go to the parade for the guardians and maybe well get to see prince Haru," said Kari exitedlly! "hes so dream...," said kari. Maru interuppts,"Yea yea let me get dressed up, wait a minute.... YOU WOKE ME UP FIVE HOURS EARLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Mean while....

In the sky capital shoku cries of pain filled the streets bodies everywhere and a figure chases a girl into an alleyway

"Someone help me," said the angel princess! the shadow comes closer. "Hehehe no where to hide now little one come to me and i will consider making you my pet," said the demonic shadow. "Stop dont go any closer," said a mysterious voice. "It is i Galvin the wing of justice," said the angel warrior!

"Why are the guardians here how did you find out," said the shadow hessitently?

"I am on order of the guardian comander to protect princess Reina, surrender now and ill spare your life," said Galvin.

"RRRRAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWRRRR ill rip off that smug look on your face," said the shadow. In the blink of an eye Galvin draws his sword and then puts it on his side once more. All eyes were openned wide to see that he sliced the demon in half. "You are safe but we must head to Yashuna castle the prince is waiting," said Galvin. And with that the two set off to Yashuna.

Back at Eld....

"Now that im up i guess ill head to work for a bit," said Maru. As he heads to the door the door opens. Good morning everyone! "Oh hello Shino good morning to you too," said Kari. "Well im off see ya later little sister," Maru said as he left. As Maru stepped through the door his bracelet falls off. "Hey kari look a key," Shino said exitedlly "Its so shiny!" "Be careful with that, said Kari imidiately! "Its brothers most treasured item."

"Whats so special about this key," asked Shino?

"I dont know he never told me," said Kari. "He always avoids talking about it and starts acting weird."

"We should return it then," said Shino "He might freak out if he see's its gone."



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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 03, 2007 @ 07:19pm
Cool^^ Cant wait to see the rest and ending!


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 18, 2007 @ 04:53am
Awesome story bro... just hurry up wit tha next part!!! lol jk take ur time smile



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