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Hero's Story
A great mystery in the kingdom of Eld. This is the story of Maru a doctor in Eld and a girl he is charged to take care of. A shadow lingers in the streets of Eld and a mysterious illness strikes the world. Can Maru figure out the mystery before the w
Chapter 2: Fated Meeting
At the clinic Maru sits in his office. "What a great day and I came to work, what a waste," said maru. Just then shouts are heard outside. whats going on outside maru wondered and ran out of the office room. yelling is heard off in the distance. Up ahead a swarm of people is surrounding the pub. "Get out of the way let me through," said Maru as he made his way through the swarm.

"move out of the way," said a child as she ran towards Maru. Acting swiftly Maru grabs the girls by the back of her shirt.

"Let me go" she pleaded with a cute look in her eyes. A rather round man approaches them."Thank you Doctor for catching this theif," said the shop keeper. "What exactly did she steal," Maru asked? "All she stole was a piece of bread," said the shop keeper."I left the money on the regester old man," she said angrlly. "How much does she owe," Maru asked? "Well if she said she left the money on the regester then she owes nothing," the man said with a smile.

They all walk to the shop they seach the regester. "See its right there," she said as she pointed at the regester. "Oh your right but i counted it your still short 100 gold" said the man as he counted. "Im sorry thats all i have.." she said sadlly. "Ill pay it" said Maru as he reached into his pocket. "Its alright Dr. Nightshade ill just over look this one" the man said nicelly. "Really you will," she said with relief, "thank you so much.".

"Just dont do it again you hear, if your short on cash just say so ill understand," said the shop keeper. Maru walks out the door ,"Alright if you both understand each other now ill take my leave".

As Maru walks down the street he hears a voice behind him. "WAIT!!!!" says the voice in the distance. It was the girl. "Is there something else i can do for you," asked Maru. "We didnt get to introduce ourselves yet," she said. "Im Isume im a class 4 seed whats you name?". "My name is Maru im a doctor here in Eld its a pleasure to meet you," Maru said with a smile, "If your a seed member then shouldnt you be getting prepared for the parade you're all gonna be in?"

"I was wondering.." Isume said with a red blushing face. "What is it Isume," Maru asked staring into her eyes? "Well i was wondering if you would be my guest and ride with me in the parade," said Isume.

A silence between them happened just then. Isume looks at the ground. Maru walks forward and places his hand on her shoulder. "Then lets go together," he said in a gentle way. Isume looks at him and smiles. They both head to the fairground.






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kuvark
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 29, 2007 @ 07:50am
awesome bro biggrin do tha next chapter now... and try to fix all of tha mistakes mad P: mrgreen


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 03, 2007 @ 04:49am
Dude Awesome Story!!!



Itonami Kira
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