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Hero's Story
A great mystery in the kingdom of Eld. This is the story of Maru a doctor in Eld and a girl he is charged to take care of. A shadow lingers in the streets of Eld and a mysterious illness strikes the world. Can Maru figure out the mystery before the w
Chapter 3: Where is brother
Somewhere in the middle of town....

"Hey Kari where's the hospital we've been walking for hours," said Shino? As they walk down the road they come to a large building. "Here it is," said Kari as she walked through the doors. They both approach the counter. As they walked they looked at all the patients waiting to be treated. There were many people and most of them were childeren. They looked like they were in so much pain that Kari and Shino had to keep their eyes forward to keep themselves from crying, "Hello how can i help you today," said the woman at the counter? "Is Doctor Nightshade in," asked Kari. "Im sorry you just missed him, you see there was some trouble outside and he went to investigate," said the woman. "Can you tell me which way he went," asked Kari? "Sorry, i don't know which way he went, but some people said the noise was comming from the bakery down the street," said the woman. That being said Kari and Shino head off towards the bakery.

"It's just up ahead I see it," says Shino. They run down the street getting closer and closer to their goal. They get so close its just past the fountain in the center of town. They hear a voice by the fountain. Yo Kari what's up you seem like your in a rush. "Oh, sorry Souma I don't have much time I have to find Maru," said Kari as she ran past him. "HEY WAIT UP I WANNA COME TOO," said Souma as he caught up to them. As they all ran toward the bakery suddenly the owner walks out of the shop . "Out of the way old man," says Souma running at full speed. The owner tries to move out of the way but it was too late. They are all out cold.

Four hours later....

People gather around the castle's main road. The people of Eld cheer and cheer for the guardians as they make their way to the castle along side the Prince Haru. The streets lined with many types of people both human's, angel's, even demon's all for the celebration of the Prince's return. Back at the shop Kari and the others stir from their sleep.

Oww....... they all say as they get up. As they get up they notice it has gotten a bit darker. Souma gets up and looks at his watch. "AHHH IT'S STARTED," said Souma in a very worried voice,"WERE GONNA MISS THE PARADE!"

They all are just getting up from sleep. They all looked at each other for a moment. Parade? they all thought hmmm...... "WHAT!!!!!!!"

"Why didnt you say anything before lets hurry and get to the parade,"said Shino as she grabbed Kari's arm and ran. "Wait what about brother,"said Kari as she was being pulled along? "We'll find him later hurry lets go to where the parade hasn't been to yet.

As they ran toward the castle's main gates they notice that there were suspicious looking people walking passed them. As they passed a sudden chill ran down Shino and Kari's spines. "What was that just now,"said Shino in a terrified way,"I think my heart skipped a beat."

"Hey you three,"said a guard approaching them. The parade is almost here you should get a better place to veiw from."



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kuvark
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 01, 2007 @ 12:01am
awesome bro biggrin cant wait for the next chapter


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 08, 2007 @ 05:23pm
hey maru! nice teacher



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