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At the gate the prince comes around the corner for the final road to get to the castle gate. The SEED guarding the prince rush ahead to secure the castle the prince is left alone. Meanwhile Kari and Shino watch as the prince makes his way to the gate. Both watch in awe at Haru's looks and style. Almost like zombies.
"EEEEEEEEEEEEEE...", scream both of them, He's comming this way!"
The crowd's cheering was like an erupting volcano. At that moment Haru was so happy that he could'nt help but smile. Suddenly his horse stops and the gates close. A child and a man appear in front of the gate.
"Thats as far as you go," Says the boy "DIE!"
"Who are you," asked Haru.
The boy rushes toward Haru with a dagger. Acting quickly He draws his sword barely blocking the atempt on his life. But the man gave a mighty blow with his sword injuring Haru severly.
Just then a spear seperates Haru from the attackers. A girl on a black horse appears in between them. "Are you ok", Says the girl.
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Hero's Story
A great mystery in the kingdom of Eld. This is the story of Maru a doctor in Eld and a girl he is charged to take care of. A shadow lingers in the streets of Eld and a mysterious illness strikes the world. Can Maru figure out the mystery before the w
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like the sory so far, and get bettr already! i dont like hearin that my friend is in the hospital, AGAIN!
anyway its comin along nicely and ur formatting has improved, well, love ya lots,
Kat