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l-l Shoulder Angel l-l
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Poems... Critique please...
A Poem For Kitsu

Sure Sasuke's pretty cute
Athletic and strong to boot
He's also cocky, quiet and smart
But he's just a work of art
And I think you should know
He's some dumb guy from some kid's show
And your apeel
Is much more real
And soon you'll see that you've got me
Not because your him
But what he can't be


Perfectly Imperfect

Ok boys
We're not your toys
You play on your TV
We're not the girls from an anime show
Or manga book
We're reall you know
We don't have boobs as big as tires
We're flesh and blood
Not ink or wires
We don't dress like sluts from fantasys
Our purpose on earth is not to please
We're not your candy, toy or tool
So if you expect perfection then you're a fool
Because I myself, am sick of the fight
Competeing with fiction
Just isn't right
So I give up, I quite, you win
I can't get giant boobs
I can't be sickly thin
I just hope one day
That boys will see
That we can't beat perfection
To bad, sorry



GAME OVER

Women's Fiction Addiction

Sure the boys are cool
Yes they're pretty hot
But it's not the way that real life goes
Whether we like it or not
Most boys don't have abs as hard as rocks,
The perfect body,
Or really big ...
SOCKS!!!!
They won't sweep you off to a magical land
Men are imperfect,
Thats why they're called man
Most men don't do stunts or say everything right
Real life is real life
No matter how hard we fight
Now lets accept the facts
And hopefully see
That no man is perfect
And neither are we


Abortion
Hm... What is abortion?
Abortion's a choice
It's a choice to raise or kill some one
To bad the victim has no voice
What's that you say?
Raising a child's
A price you can't pay
Well I do see your problem
But I have two answers you see
One is adoption
Don't kill the baby
The second is obvious
It's just common sense
When that boy drops his pants
You put up your defense
It's said many times
Your reap what you sow
Don't let your child's life be
One the world wont know.


Yes these were all written by me...





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KitsukieGT188
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comment Commented on: Fri Nov 02, 2007 @ 10:07pm
First one, made me smile alot, I love you so much, and I'll be myself more.

The second one, Your already perfect to me, I don't want someone whos got huge boobs the size of watermelons i don't want one as thin as a stick, I want someone whos warm and nice and loves me for who I am, and I WISH YOU WOULD SEE YOURSELF WITH MY EYES CAUSE YOU ******** HOT! YOU GIVE ME BONERS WHEN I THINK ABOUT YOU AT TIMES!

The third made me laugh, No i don't have very large socks! lol and it also made me happy.

And the third one depressed me, and just to let you know, I'd rather raise my child then kill it, We have parents if we need help they will do what they can. I love you and want you to have my babies! >.>


comment Commented on: Mon Nov 05, 2007 @ 09:36pm
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I did not want to read that 2nd paragraph... *painful mental image*

Anyway... Those were very creative and touched many issues I feel NEED TO BE BROUGHT TO ATTENTION. lol



-Babydoll Gone Wrong-
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KitsukieGT188
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comment Commented on: Tue Nov 06, 2007 @ 12:12am
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