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I like to write poems about what goes on in life or just stuff that i make up^^
A Two Faced Nation
We say were a nation under God, we put his name on our money, our pleage. Yet we strayed away so far. We've tested the Lord our God,when we shouldn't. Our judgement is coming,we can't stop this,but there is hope! If completly turn around and grab the the horns on the alter, and be true God, and be a nation under God. We will be save from the jugdement.






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InkheartGirl165
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 11:39pm
nice neutral ninja


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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 10, 2008 @ 02:14am
very true ...
it makes me reflect on my faith and question things that i havn't thought about before..
like always, this is a remarkable poem and touching to those who can relate to it ..
thank you for giving me the honour of reading it .
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twin1_camille
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GrimmkittyReila
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 11, 2008 @ 01:08am
you are true we all pleage or alegence to god but some ppl are just not under standing to what there say,and most ppl do under stand it and are being plain hypocrites,they testing god when they shouldnt cause theyll always lose,nobody can defeat him not even the devil


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 15, 2008 @ 08:22pm
It does Make you stop and think...
Great poem Zach!



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juliet-capulet94
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 03:24am
loooveee it you shoudl make a book of poems do you save these poems you could get into a really good college with these poems 4laugh


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 20, 2008 @ 05:33pm
You write really great poetry Ely. 3nodding Nice to see you again!!



Michiyo Yamashi
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smexii_nikkysays_RAWR
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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 21, 2008 @ 10:41pm
i ttly agre heart


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 01, 2008 @ 05:10am
nice poem crown_clown926, it's also true. the lord is our savior, phrase the lord. ninja smile



clayman0302
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