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Poems:Life
I like to write poems about what goes on in life or just stuff that i make up^^
Poems of Life: Judgment
Storm clouds gather in the skies, Thunder claps and the hammer falls, wind whips through the trees bringing the taste of judgment. The innocent are swept up, while the guilty await for their sentence. Those who are left behind have the choice to have choice to accept the Spirit. The judgment is coming make your choice now. Some will bare the mark of the beast others will fight for the living God. The judgment will come like the pouring rain. To either welcome those of the living God or to condemn those who’ve rejected the living God.






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GrimmkittyReila
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 20, 2008 @ 05:41pm
wow this poem is really powerful it sounds like judgment day,but maybe thats what your were writeing anyways great poem as always ^^


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 20, 2008 @ 05:44pm
thanks^^long time no see^^



Crown_Clown926
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thestolenpromise
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 02, 2008 @ 02:58am
Wow. I love it. You are an amazing poet!!! whee Do you have deviantart??/


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 02:18am
the referance it makes to nature makes the poem flow so smoothly, like rain from the skies. lol
wonderful imagry!
xx



twin1_camille
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GrimmkittyReila
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 31, 2008 @ 04:01pm
this one poem always catches my attention, though i dont know why lol , maybe its probably one reason ill never know


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