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Poems:Life
I like to write poems about what goes on in life or just stuff that i make up^^
Poems of Life: Teach me how to fly.
Heal me, but leave the scar. Pick me up on my broken wings and teach me how to fly. Help me soar above the clouds so that I may see your face. To feel your sun like golry touch my spread out wings. Keep me under your wing so that I may learn about you more. Heal my hurts and cuts, leave the scars as a reminder to me. To know that I was not was worthy of your grace that you have on me. Hold me close so that I do not wonder far.






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clayman0302
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 21, 2008 @ 11:13pm
That's cool crown, but it would be even cooler if we all could fly without the use of planes. 3nodding ninja cool


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 22, 2008 @ 09:04pm
That's a beautiful poem Crown-kun.



Nibi-san
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twin1_camille
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 23, 2008 @ 07:31am
i love how you make flight seem so natural even though it is so hard to take off sometimes ... you use it not literally, but metaphorically which is just soo touching and so realistic that you'd do almost anything to make it happen...


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