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Poems:Life
I like to write poems about what goes on in life or just stuff that i make up^^
Poems of Life: A New Love
My love why did you have to die for me? You were perfect in every way, yet you died to set me free? This confuses me in every way because I am filth and not worthy of you at all. I've forsaken you yet you gave up your life for me? But now I know and understand the beauty of this gift. For you have given me the choice to love you back, your love completes the rift that's inside me. It'll never die nor fade away, it flows like a river in my soul.






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Aeyera
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 28, 2008 @ 02:29am
Wow, that's deep. Really well done there, Zach. biggrin


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 30, 2008 @ 10:59pm
I LOVE IT!!! heart heart



smexii_nikkysays_RAWR
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clayman0302
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 01, 2008 @ 05:06am
your love completes the rift that's inside me, that's true poetry crown_clown926.
I hope I find someone who can do so for me. smile 3nodding
P.S. that's a good poem


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 02:19am
-beautiful-
xx



twin1_camille
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