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Aurrik's Scripts
My writings of prose, poetry, short story, songs and other likeminded stuff. My other profile, wulfreiks, holds the same information.
Puzzle Pieces
Song
((I had someone look at a few of my songs for critique. The ideas behind some of my things were a little overdone, as he said, and suggested I tried something unique. This is what I got....))


Piece by piece by piece by piece
Piece by piece by piece by piece

When the puzzle pieces
fall to my feet.
You'll see what's beneath.
The creature hidden in me.

Piece by piece by piece by piece
When the puzzle is complete,
all will see.
That the darkness I've fought,
is winning in me.

Piece by piece by piece by piece
When the masquerade
is only skin deep.
The paper skin
hides a soul that is weak.

When these puzzle pieces
lay at my feet.
Corruption will then
consume what was me.
This is what I get
for morbid curiosity.

Piece by piece by piece by piece
Piece by piece by piece by piece

I feel like
I'm never complete.
When I peel away
these pieces of me.
Pieces to a puzzle,
the puzzle that was me.
A puzzle that will
never be complete.

Piece by piece by piece by piece
They all once fit.
This picture once pure.
A fading light,
In a world that's at war.

Piece by piece by piece by piece
Piece by piece by piece by piece

The forces of good,
the darkened of heart,
they tear each apart.
When the innocent
are in the middle,
who is at fault?

Piece by piece by piece by piece
When one is the battle,
who's soul is for claim.
The light tries to save
when the other likes pain

Piece by piece by piece by piece
Showing the world
of my defeat.
That's what they see.
When all of the pieces
lie at my feet

It shows what I've hidden
deep within me.
The creature inside
who has tried
to dominate me.
The one I've fought
to the end and more.
When the darkness consumes
it affects the world.

Piece by piece by piece by piece
Piece by piece by piece by piece
Piece by piece by piece by piece
Piece by piece by piece by piece

So shall the corruption,
Consume humanity.
No one is safe,
just take a look at me.

Piece by piece by piece by piece






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Eldako
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 09, 2008 @ 07:40am
Damn I really like it. I sang it. I did not read it. It flowed very well. I did it twice with two different ways of singing it.

It had a lot of meaning to it as well. I will not go into that as people need to draw from it their own conclusions.


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