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Fall to Death
Shot through the heart,
I fall.
Within a few seconds,
I hit the ground.
Though it feels like I fall for slowly,
An eternity seems to pass.
He's there,
Watching,
Waiting.
There's a sound.
I watch him dash over.
He's desperate,
To see if I'm okay.
I whisper to him,
It's a soft sound.
Then I look at him,
And I smile.
Tears come from his eyes,
As well as mine.
Then I close my eyes,
And he sets me down gently.
He knows I didn't want to die this way.
But alas,
I have.
But he was by my side.
He's kneeling in pool of blood,
Yet,
I wanted to die with him next to me.






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Amaterasu Rainstorm
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 16, 2005 @ 02:28am
That is a Beautiful, but sad poem. I wish I could write poems like that.


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 16, 2005 @ 07:48pm
omg..................that is amazing..............your awesome.................



Kage no Shikyo
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sk8er_weirdo
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commentCommented on: Tue Oct 25, 2005 @ 04:15am
this was my fave of them all mrgreen


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 08, 2005 @ 04:11pm
Bellissimo



Hayate Kamwe
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Thane Wexler
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 03, 2006 @ 07:54pm
Very good, read my journal please I am not nearly as good as you are but you can read it anyway...


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