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Why A Womane Cries
If a woman cries,
Never ask what's wrong.
She suffers from depression.
She cries for a reason.
Her tears are an escape,
An escape from herself,
An escape from her pain.
She tries to hide her tears,
She hides from the world.
She puts on a smiles,
And says she's fine.
But inside,
She's hurt,
She's hit with by a massive wave,
A wave of depression.
And i say this now,
Because it's true.






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~_Darkfire-sword_~
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 22, 2005 @ 09:18pm
oh ur right it is true...sometimes!i love that poem! do u mine if i use it?


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 21, 2005 @ 08:20pm
What a beautiful poem!And this is so true!!!I like how it's been compared to other things as well.



t o x i c l i p s t i c k
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Thane Wexler
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 03, 2006 @ 07:56pm
A lot like me in a sense.

It is very good work again. (You are really good wink ) The wave is a thing that passes but still returns. The poem is good as it is but if you wish to revise it please remember my comment.


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