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Angel of Death, Grim Reaper Please don't run, I don't want to hurt you. I don't want to do this. I know you don't like this, But, It can't be helped. I'm sorry you have to see this, But, Yes, I'm the Angel of Death, The Grim Reaper, The messanger of the Spirit World. I, Am the one, Who helps lost souls, Find their way.

Posted by: Dragon of the Night Skies Mon Dec 26, 2005 @ 03:39am

VonLied was truly a gifted man. He sacrificed everything he had and loved to serve his country. He taught me some of the things that will continue to help me grow and blossom as a person.

Please watch over us, Von. Until the day we can meet again, please keep vigil and guide us to you. Please wait for us.

What my avi means:
Black - mourning
Gothic Veil - blinded by love
Tears- blinded by tears of sorrow
Spirits- to know he's with me always
Leaves- Gogh Reed was his favorite EI and his color green

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Thane Wexler
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Commented on: Sat Jun 03, 2006 @ 07:59pm


	Good work. My hints to you are: the reaper doesnt do such moreso separates them and puts them out of their misery. And the last 2 lines are fairly powerful. (Use more adjectives- it allows for more sensation and feeling in the poem.)

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