I wrote this poem and a bunch of people wanted to read it because it was for some book thing. They all got to this one line, the only thing that can come from her eyes are bloody tears, and they always say, I don't get it....grrrrr.....I get it, I wrote it!!! Annoyance. I am in computer tech right now so I am gonna put up the poem....everybody also kept saying it was sad......*sigh* I'm not gonna comment about it, I have a head ache and I am surrounded by a lot of people I don't like. Well here is the poem...
Lonely Sole
Her eyes so blank with no emotion, Her love so lost so as devotion. Her heart goes black and icy numb, They call her name but she won't come. She's in too deep to cry out her fears, The only thing that can come from her eyes are bloody tears. She has no home no place to hide, Nobody is left for her to confide. Darkness now dawning on her heart, But it's been that way from the start. Now no light is left it slipped away, Now always dark never a new day. The moon now shines above her head, No one cna save her for she is dead. There is no more pain or sorrow anymore, It ended when she walked through death's door.
yeah that was it and all the people except one who read it said it was sad or didn't get the bloody tears part.....goes to show you how deep some of our school body is....anyway I'm gonna go now, my eyes are bugging me. I might be able to take a nap or something.....talk later.
~Lovin
Zombie Doll` · Fri Mar 11, 2005 @ 07:50pm · 4 Comments |