- Title: Memorable moments
- Artist: Akuyi
- Description: A young deer wandered through the forest in search of her first big adventure, when she got into a landslip and lost her footing. As she came around a stabbing pain spread into her left eye. She cried for help, but noone heard, she was too far away from anyone. But then something touched her forehead tenderly and the pain disappeard. She opened her eyes and was amazed she still could see through both of them, then realized the young dragon in front of her, carrying an even younger bird around...
- Date: 04/26/2009
- Tags: memorable moments deer dragon bird
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Z0MBIED - 04/29/2009
- Story is a little odd, but the overall avatar is cute. Nice colour scheme. c:
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- cherryberry-kitty - 04/28/2009
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the story confused me a bit but i really like the avi and its really beautiful 5/5 try to fix the story though.
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- nosaka1 - 04/27/2009
- hmmm...............
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- zuttodark - 04/27/2009
- I wouldn't of called it a deer. Just saying. I do like the colors, flow, and your story so 5/5.
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- Akuyi - 04/26/2009
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The discription could've been two times longer, but submission rules were mad with me, so that's the result. Yes, the dragon restored the lost eye, therefore it is red. He made it see, not look nice. The bird stands for his helpfulness.
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