Sophie Lee

• Artist: xXCoCo_BubblesXx
• Description: This is a story of sophie I made up but is a little non fiction too!
• Date: 11/06/2008
• Tags: sophie

Hi I am Sophie Lee and I am 15. I was adopted froa Korean couple when I was young only 3. My parents were french but lost me in a super-market in Soeul. My current parents adopted me and I live in a small village just outside soeul which is under attack. My bed shakes and my mirror falls and shatters into a million pieces I here bombs falling outside and I wait until I hear a huge noise. A bomb hit my parents bedroom they are dead. I rush downstairs and grab some survival items. Money, blankets, food, water and hygiene products. I stuff it in my back pack and rush outside dogging bullets and bombs. I look back and a tear rolls down my cheek my house is on fire everything is gone I rush into the forest. I am alone no power at all. I am Sophie Lee and I am 15 years old.

Comments

[donkey son]

it is a good storyline... i agree with chi-eah better description = better picture.

[xXCoCo_BubblesXx]

Aww thanx . . . Yeah I know theres errors but its a good story line :]

[chi-eah]

A lot of grammatical and spelling errors. This intro seemed a bit upbeat at first look, but as I read through it, it became more emotional and tear-jerking. I would love to see this intro be taken and expanded, with a whole description of the adoption, and bombing. If you decide to write more, I'd suggest slowing it down and explaining the whole scene out, so that I can get a better picture of it.