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i started waiting the moment i was born.
i waited for you to be brought into this world,
waited for us to meet.
waited still for you to notice me.
i waited for you to love me like i have always loved you.
waited to make your legs weak
and now i continue to wait for you, for you to be mine
forever.
- by insainartist |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: waiting
- Artist: insainartist
- Description: the history of us
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: waiting love forever
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Comments (7 Comments)
- R4Z0R5CYTH3 - 01/29/2012
- Nooooooo!!! Voting ended >.<
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- vyn--_JOT - 07/05/2011
- This reminds me of the Black Jewels Trilogy. Good job. I give it 4/5
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- SDK Manga Girl - 08/15/2010
- that was pretty good. I don't want to repeat what everyone else said but you should put what they said in mind. It's a good poem and i love it 4/5
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- matthew valentine - 11/27/2009
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that was preity nice but you could start writing more!!
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- Mechembuchus - 11/10/2009
- Cool
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- growlzzz - 08/06/2009
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nice
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