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Compliment him,
I'm fond of him,
Yet I'm wrong,
It's more than that.
Never felt this way,
Dreaming of him,
Feels like floating,
What's this feeling?
Is this what they call love?
Heavy humor, Troubled minds,
Tremors roll through the body.
Dare I trespass? Cross the line?
...I shall.
I hold his hand in mine
Life or death,
I'm in love with you:
You're my Heaven.
- by HolyCuppyCakes |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Heaven
- Artist: HolyCuppyCakes
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Description:
A poem I wrote. Does it sound right? >.< Please help. [By the way, Heavy humor means a sad mood.]
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: heaven
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Comments (7 Comments)
- KittyPantsu - 11/29/2008
- nice ^^
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- Damned2Hell - 11/27/2008
- luv it Jackie dear!lol. 59048353740985409/59048353740985409
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- HolyCuppyCakes - 11/27/2008
- OMG, no one has given me s**t for this being about a guy or a sucky poem yet! x3
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- iKylie-Ha - 11/27/2008
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Beautiful.
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- o Taichi o - 11/27/2008
- tears fall* So lovely.. Y w Y!
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- HolyCuppyCakes - 11/27/2008
- Please vote && leave comments! Tell me if I need to improve anything, any of your suggestions, etc. Or just tell me if you liked it!
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- Sexed Up Unicorns - 11/27/2008
- It's fancy. I likes it ;D
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