to much pain to live with

• Artist: drama_lover101
• Description: i always wanted to be a song
  writer ...and this is my #1 song
  please rate and tell me what u think about it
  thanks you
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: aliciasongs

'm looking everywhere for someone
im looking im looking im looking
but everywhere i go i try to find
the one and only person
after awhile i learn i cant find him..
the sadness is to painful
my heart is like its dieing
my mind like its crying
but after awhile i learn to live without him

Comments

[SteveNash13rox]

It was alrite different words i agree, 2/5

[Rock_Girl64]

its very good! i think some new words would make it even better! Other than that I'm still adding it to my fave

[Toxik_Tonik]

I think that you could use better word choice
Other then that its good.