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I crash
I burn
on the inside
I smile
I laugh
Just for show
- by hellobeautiful793 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: Suffering
- Artist: hellobeautiful793
- Description: really short!
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: suffering
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Comments (3 Comments)
- hellobeautiful793 - 06/16/2009
- thanks!
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- Mutandanstan - 06/15/2009
- to me, I think it would be better if you left out the 'and' like how you put 'I crash and' to me it would sound better if you did 'I crash, I burn, on the inside...' just a suggestion! but good job though
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- Chrimson Butterfly - 01/25/2009
- my life 101 5/5
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