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My heart achs,
and i stay awake,
through the night,
in the fight.
I moarn o how i moarn
for my heart acks,
then i stay awake,
through the night,
in the fight.
In my dream,
i had a frightful scream,
as i vanish,
i was quiet famished.
For my heart acks,
then i stay awake,
through the night,
in the fight.
In the end,
it is done,
but was it fun,
but i deid in the end
- by JonTheRaveKing |
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- | Submitted on 10/09/2009 |
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- Title: broken heart
- Artist: JonTheRaveKing
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- Date: 10/09/2009
- Tags: broken heart
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- Faerie - 10/09/2009
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Revise and re edit.
"aches" not "acks"
Capitalize, a lot of typos.
Other than that, you got a good start =) - Report As Spam