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Soon Chrismas will be here.
then New Years.
Soon after winter will clear.
Winter has come but soon will go.
Then there will be no more snow,
and the sun
will shine bright again.
Time for a family
to come back close
and exchange
cares and thoughts.
Now here come
parties and beer
Now the New Years here.
- Title: Winter's Holidays
- Artist: Artainia
- Description: Its a little poem that I did abought the two holidays that are in the season of Winter,Chrismas and New Years Day. ^_^
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: winter holidays christmas newyears
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Animeplay99 - 02/01/2009
- I like it! 4laugh
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- Yuki no Ryu - 01/29/2009
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awww............... it should be longer
pretty good ^^ - Report As Spam
- Dr Makai - 01/28/2009
- Grammar wasnt to bad, and poem lacked structure. At first, you began with christmas, leading into new years, and concluded with winters end. Then you repeated. Overall it was good. 4/5
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- evilcelebi - 01/22/2009
- i love that you should be very proud
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- -l-Jerez-l- - 01/17/2009
- This was very well done...it should have been a bit longer though,you have talent.
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- one_and_only_me_jean107 - 01/14/2009
- i agree with the person below me.. but still nice XD.. 4.5/5.. since 4.5 is not available.. I'll just make it 5.. ^__^
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- Rockrockzan - 01/14/2009
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theres a t in christmas!
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