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Soon Chrismas will be here.
then New Years.
Soon after winter will clear.
Winter has come but soon will go.
Then there will be no more snow,
and the sun
will shine bright again.
Time for a family
to come back close
and exchange
cares and thoughts.
Now here come
parties and beer
Now the New Years here.
- Title: Winter's Holidays
- Artist: Artainia
- Description: Its a little poem that I did abought the two holidays that are in the season of Winter,Chrismas and New Years Day. ^_^
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: winter holidays christmas newyears
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HajiMon - 12/21/2008
- guys try seeing my poem i hope you like it
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- RainbowStylez - 12/20/2008
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thats not badd (:
votee back o:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/event/holiday-poem-contest/vote/?entry_id=100769703#title - Report As Spam
- BrownieMonster1233654 - 12/20/2008
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ha! lmao nice one bloodtearrose! i agree with her "learn to spell corectly" ^___________^ although it was nice but it was also draggish
oh and lunacy you almost spelled haunnkkah right ^_^ there is two "k"s and a "h" at the end. - Report As Spam
- All You Hate - 12/18/2008
- Easy fellas! you should know not all people on Gaia are english literature professors! it's nice and the meaning mattes more than the way you express that meaning, 4/5 keep up the good stuff! as to the vocab, you only need little practice with the endings.
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- bloodtearrose - 12/18/2008
- I'm Harsh on critique and I’ve been looking for someone to bag on all day, brace yourself. The poem is simple. You spelled Christmas wrong, and I think Valentine’s Day is technically in winter seeing as December, January, and February make up the whole season. Although, I maybe wrong. Furthermore, you stabbed my writer’s heart, and you should really consider revising your work on Microsoft word in the future... You aren't going to be babied in the poet's world.
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- scruple - 12/16/2008
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I give it around a 3 or 2
Anndd...Christmas is spelled wrong
I also agree with Lunacy - Report As Spam
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