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Christmas eve, the night is here.
Holly hangs from candles, dear.
Careful placed the presents, filled with cheer.
Its Christmas eve, a night of wonder.
Yet my heart is torn asunder.
The love I lost is in the ground.
The time we lost is never found.
I dream of spending these days with you.
I take a walk, heart filled with dread.
To that yard where you lay your head.
I'll place a present, never to be opened.
And regret all those words unspoken.
Dearest love you candle unlit.
Never again will life caress your lips.
I miss you so, my lost sweet love.
Rest in peace, with the stars above.
On Christmas day I'll fake a smile.
Wile you dwell in my heart all the wile.
It breaks my heart that you will never see.
Just how much you meant to me.
Its on these days I miss you most.
And though your skin is cold and dead.
A tear my eyes will always shed.
Christmas day is drawing near.
But it's you that I hold dear.
- by Yur-Yur Yuri |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: A Christmas Tear.
- Artist: Yur-Yur Yuri
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Description:
A Christmas poem for the best friend and love I lost. She died just 4 days after New Years Day. I love and miss her. RIP Alie J Scott.
( And yeah I wrote this in like 15 minutes...but I still think its good :D )) - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas love sorrow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- CrobinsX - 12/20/2008
- PiperHecht what are you talking about? It was my poem that I take credit for. Its deleted now from all this so just drop it. And what if my parents find out? "oh no they got in trouble over the internet" ....
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- PiperHecht - 12/20/2008
- hmmm... copyright infringement, harrassment, and cowardly enough to go get friends to help with the job. Do your parents know you do this sort of thing, XxDramexX? Do they care?
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- Yur-Yur Yuri - 12/20/2008
- Thank you Hollistergirl. That was a very sweet sentiment.
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- Radioactive Homicide - 12/20/2008
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Great Poem! 5/5.
I'm sorry about your friend, but just know that right now shes in a better place, watching over you. - Report As Spam
- squirrle_man69 - 12/20/2008
- i agree with crobins
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- CrobinsX - 12/20/2008
- You need to grow up. Your the kind of person that gets amazing things pulled off tv and such because it hurt your "feelings" or "beliefs". You say its your video yet you post on a public site? If your video is that private take it off youtube. You really need to chill...
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