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The winter snow, holly, and mistletoe.
All the jolly that is spread,
Even a love to be wed.
All the joy in the world,
Comes with one little toy.
All the excitement,
With no fear.
The holidays are here,
With not one tear.
The happiness is coming,
While the holiday drums are loudly drumming.
All of this is said,
With only the words in my head.
The holidays are here,
With nothing to dead.
- Title: The Holidays Are Here
- Artist: meow2933
- Description: I figure that I can be happy for the holidays. Everybody can be happy.
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: holidays here
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Comments (7 Comments)
- NekoGenesis - 05/31/2010
- You might have misspelled a word or two at the very end, dear. It's very short and to the point, but how the poem is written seems to make it fit. Excessive use of the same word, however meaningful, quickly makes the whole thing redundant. When next writing a happy poem, trying integrating the use of the '!' for certain lines. 'The holidays are here!' better conveys the excitement and happiness you are trying to portray.
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- mimi9141 - 03/03/2009
- nice poetry!
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- KG-GUY - 02/16/2009
- that was awesome 5 stars it was terrific not like any other bravo,bravo
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- yummieskittles - 12/28/2008
- awesome. 5/5 and yah i think that last one is suppose to be "dread" too xd .
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- The Lazy Powm - 12/16/2008
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i said ill give you a 5 on my other avi! well here ya go!
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- zircon65 - 12/15/2008
- i think the last word is supposed to be "dread". if it is not wrong then that last line makes no sense.
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- meow2933_lover - 11/26/2008
- Adri you have fear, you have a tear, you dread it... don't you? I know you better than that. I know that you have tons more words in your head than that.
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