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shall i compare thee to a summers day?,
the warmth from the fire keeps my big heart lit,
and the vibrant colors fufill us as if we are mother nature,
this is our life and what we do with it is our choice,
but the meaningfull laughs from the young is what fills our heart with joy,
life is like an ocean the rides the tide but finds something true
something that completes their everyday feelings and winter is that time,
MERRY CHRISTMAS to all and to all a good night.
lexy h.
a.k.a(hotline330hottie)
- by D3monik_Ang3l |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: a winterz breeze
- Artist: D3monik_Ang3l
- Description: poetry
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: winterz breeze
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Hot killermaster - 06/02/2009
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thats really cool
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- Blueflamez6 - 04/14/2009
- yo u just quoted what shake spear said thats jank
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- Vhalcrist - 03/17/2009
- i dont know much in writing but i like it. for me the words used in some of the lines are somewhat simple. i dont know just sharing my ppoint of veiw. nice piece. keep it up.
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- erbleach - 12/31/2008
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its kool i like it and i ove the line with the tides ur awesome keep going!
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