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cold
the cold freezes the
snow below my own two feet
making snowflakes blend...
icy snowfall
this icy snowfall
drowns all the flowers and grass
in its icy depths
ice
the ice that starts to
form overtakes all the snow
freezing whats in sight
- Title: Icy snow fall
- Artist: yokume210
- Description: this is another 1 of my haiku... i hope u enjoy! ^_^ (well i might do more than 1 haiku)
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: snow fall
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Comments (7 Comments)
- juliawhysoasian - 07/14/2010
- love it!
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- Edible lilmama_1314 - 07/21/2009
- this poem is like a 1000out 100! thats how great it is!
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- WWE_ECW_1 - 02/07/2009
- love it its better than perfect
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- kittman12 - 12/30/2008
- 3 in 1. I like it! perfect!
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- anime_roleplaying_mule - 12/11/2008
- well i like it but you should make the titles stand out a bit more! cuz i couldn't really tell what the title/poem wuz... srry if this offends u!
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- anime_roleplaying_mule - 12/11/2008
- well...i kinda got confused with the title and the poem! make sure we can tell where the title is and where the poem is!
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- Luna_luna8 - 12/07/2008
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aww i like it!
and the reference image is nice! - Report As Spam
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