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When your eyes fill up with sadness,
You try to show the world your gladness
But when you blink, the tears roll down
And reveal to the world your hidden frown
- by Hatsumomo Maiyuki |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Tears
- Artist: Hatsumomo Maiyuki
- Description: Kinda a dumb poam but I might as well try. I wrote this while I was crying.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: tears
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Comments (4 Comments)
- zzajkistah - 07/11/2009
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- Dissolve the Pain - 06/26/2009
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deep..i love it.
it's short, but very good. try adding more details. put more emotions into it. how did you feel? hurt? why?
great job.
5/5...amazing ;] - Report As Spam
- ExtrEmESouL21 - 05/05/2009
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- xlovely_chatterboxx - 01/10/2009
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woah^^
thats an exciting poem kind of thing!
nice one ^^~ - Report As Spam
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