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Cold winds roaring,
Animals bundled,
The moon showing brightly,
Across the winter snow,
A dark figure walks,
In his hands a girl,
A dead young girl,
Blood flowing down her locks,
Tears dripping in her face,
The dark figure crys,
And drops the girl,
He runs away,
There she is,
Dead in the winter snow,
In the dead winter night.
- by Kakuzu Stitch |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Dead Winter Night
- Artist: Kakuzu Stitch
- Description: .-.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: winter dead night
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BreeHale - 08/25/2009
- it leaves me with unanswered questions.... mystery surrounds it.... i love it! 5/5
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- Kiramea - 04/05/2009
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It could've been a a smidge bit longer.
Other than that it's good.
I give it a 4. - Report As Spam
- hiphoprox962 - 02/08/2009
- this is ver in the loving mood...it gives sort of that "unanswered" questionable thought of mistery and suprise...4 star it could've been a tiny bit longer..
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- Kyro Kashi - 12/18/2008
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That pretty good,
I'm assuming the girl was the dark figures daughter,
Since he is crying,
Who killed her is the question. - Report As Spam