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Brown eyes,
Beautiful!
Brown hair,
Perfect!
But when I talk to him I'm speechless,
Only able to laugh out fear,
Yet in my heart I want to shout,
How i really feel.
- Title: him
- Artist: kyllyr
- Description: this is a poem i made about a guy i no
- Date: 12/12/2008
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- cheddan - 12/30/2010
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i'd say its better than nothing
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- rozie10000 - 04/07/2009
- Good but it had nothing 2 do with winter...
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- Ky_McDonald - 12/21/2008
- chicka it could use some work but its ok
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- iWizzle_Dizzle - 12/17/2008
- no offense Kyllyr even though you are my friend i agree hmong goddess
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- TeddyoftheDestined - 12/16/2008
- I love it! I can "feel" it...
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- hmong goddess - 12/16/2008
- emotional thoughts but words of wisdom ur words don't feel ur feelings
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- Bloodstained Fingerprints - 12/15/2008
- ...Meh.
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