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I look into her eyes
All I see is sadness
She tries to hide
The depression inside.
No matter how hard she tries
She still can't find
The happieness in her eyes.
Everyday it's the same
She puts on a show
Afraid to say
How she lost all hope.
She writes a note on the wall
Saying how much she loves her family
But this is the only way out of her pain.
She prepares the rope
And as she does, she makes a wish
"I wish I had a friend.".
Just as she's about to hang herself the phone rings
She lets it ring waiting for the machine to get it
Ring...
Ring...
Ring...
"Hey we aren'y home right now, so after the beep you know what to do."
Beep
"Alisa, it's me Sarah. From English class, I heard your poem in class, and wanted to say how good it was. We should hang out sometime, my number's 863-5742."
She thinks about the message
Soon she takes down the rope
And cleansoff the wall.
She goes to the phone and dials Sarah
Ring...
Ring...
"Please be there."
Ring...
Ri- "Hello?"
" Hey Sarah. It's me, Alisa.".
And as they talked
I looked once more
Into her eyes.
Underneath all the depression
And under all the darkness
I see a shine of hope.
I look into her eyes
And I see a light
That she got her wish
As I look into her eyes.
- by Amaya has Fallen |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Eyes
- Artist: Amaya has Fallen
- Description: This is one of my earlier poems, and a lot of people seem to like it. It's about a girl losing all hope basically. Please read.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: eyes hope
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Comments (6 Comments)
- ur ur - 07/05/2009
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omg im not the poem type but that was really goodkeep it up cause u could go far smile wink ;p smile
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- roseblue122 - 06/20/2009
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it rox like you
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- II Chibi Suzaku II - 05/23/2009
- i give it the highest number possible
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- alyannah_alissa - 01/11/2009
- it's really good wink many people can relate in this.
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- Apocalyptic Beatdown - 12/21/2008
- That was like a really good movie or something...u even added a plot twist.
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- x-Kimy-chan - 12/19/2008
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yay im first!!!!!!
100,000/100,000
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