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whisper to the moon, glance at the frozen lake..... take away my heartache
the stray wolves hear my whisper and run the entire night, watching as the white doves take flight
a mysterious sage conjures a white veil and watches as time freezes, i won't let him do as he pleases
i come out out of hiding and conjure my own veil which will stop his malevolent
hail
the sky erupts with light and the sage disappears into the cold winter night
- by CerisiaWolfBlade |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Whisper
- Artist: CerisiaWolfBlade
- Description: a young white mage conquers a black sage
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: whisper
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Comments (7 Comments)
- angelsupernova93 - 10/12/2009
- That was amazing, you have wonderful talent
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- Joe21368 - 07/13/2009
- It's creative but you didn't even capitalize I o_o...It's not really in poem format but it's still really good, 4/5.
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- vader-lifer14 - 06/24/2009
- that's some pure talent you have. 5/5
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- MiZ P3rF3cT GuRl - 06/23/2009
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cooollll!!!
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- master tygon - 04/17/2009
- Pure masterpiece
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- lariomaster5 - 03/12/2009
- WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5/5 that was so amazing
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- NoNo Nope - 02/07/2009
- write a book that was good
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