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Bidding farewell to his lady
The tin-man goes to battle.
She watches him walk away
As his stiff joints clink and rattle.
Though her glass eyes shed no tears
The seams of her heart come undone.
She is only a bundle of cloth
When her toy soldier is gone.
He dares not look back to her
Should his willpower waste
And he return to loving arms
And her sweetly gentle embrace.
Tommy sets up his soldiers
So they surround their foe,
To rescue his sister’s doll,
And return with victory in tow.
- by Ravisher Knight |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: The Tin-Man and His Doll
- Artist: Ravisher Knight
- Description: It's pretty straight-forward. It's an older poem that I recently revised, but it's one of my favorites.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: tinman doll
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Comments (5 Comments)
- iDreamAboutThings - 10/31/2010
- This is the best poem I've read so far!!!!! I love it.
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- GreenMint13 - 06/12/2009
- this poem is cute!! and in difrent waz it can b considerd as a holiday poem... i gess..^_^
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- ikillgays - 01/09/2009
- Sucks.
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- Akienna - 12/18/2008
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Wow, I'm surprised to actually find a poem that is good!
I really enjoyed reading it! - Report As Spam
- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/18/2008
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I'm not sure if the little tin soldier is a holiday story, but I love this poem!
In the original story, both the tin soldier and the doll melt by the fire, but they turn into a molten tin heart and get to be together forever that way. :3 - Report As Spam