creepy dolls

• Artist: demixxx123
• Description: the creppy dolls live by a young girl in her bedroom..........
• Date: 11/14/2008
• Tags: creepy dolls

the creppy dolls live by a young girl in her bedroom one dol 2 dolls 3 dolls in her bedroom when the girl came home her mother told her to clean her bedroom but she did'nt want to so her mother said she will clean it at MIDNIGHT
when it was at midnight her mother went to her room and looked under the bed.......................................................................................................................
later that morning the girl went to her romm and just saw blood and blood by the dolls and there was a knife in the blood and the girl did not see it and on pupose steped on it and..................................................................





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Comments

[this username is invalid]

I agree, that was very close to, if not, terrible.

[KitsuneMint]

This was very badly written. Not only is there bad spelling, but there are no attempts to make sentences. There is not a single period, or punctuation of any kind, and there is no capitals to tell where one ends and one begins. It is also confusing how you just jump around. Good grammar is also lacking.