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After so much love, so much conflict, they were finally together.
Then he tore her all to shreds
He said he loved her.
But in one day he crushed all her passions.
He left her there, he gave no explanation.
She would never forgive him for this tragedy.
For causing her so much pain and heartache.
His so called love for her had caused her so much happiness, yet so much pain.
She thought he was her soul mate, her true love,
Like a prince in a fairy tale.
She hated herself for trusting him.
Pain
He couldn't live without her.
Her mind, her body, her soul.
And she couldn't live without him.
It had been months since they had parted.
But she still thought about him every night.
All her tears were for him.
He had made her stronger.
He had taught how to hold in her pain.
Bottled up.
And ready to explode.
But she kept it hidden.
Even when she felt she would burst,
She never let on how she was truly feeling.
Her false smile remained plastered on her face.
Though inside she was crying, dying.
End It
She sank to the floor, sobbing.
She just couldn't deal with this anymore.
She glanced in the mirror.
Her eyes were red,she had tears flowing down her face.
Her once lustrous brunette locks were dull.
She was nothing but a skeleton.
This is what he had done to her.
She was no more than a shell of a person.
She wanted to die. She begged for relief.
She needed him to know how she felt.
To feel her pain.
She crawled over to her dresser,
Felt around among her clothes for the one thing that would save her.
She took the blade into her hand,
Slowly brought it to her vein.
Poised to cut through the skin
That had been scarred countless times in the last months.
But this time, she would make it fatal.
And no one would even care...
- by x kitkatlove |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Heartbreak
- Artist: x kitkatlove
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Description:
I wrote this a long time ago o.o...
Like, a year?
And I can't tell you my motivation for this. it's extremely embarrassing -_-
So yeah, this story is depressing. It has more (like 10 more chapters) but I won't post it here.
*promises i ish not emo, doesn't cut myself, and am overall not a depressive person*
What can you submit to gaia...like what rating? Keep it PG or PG-13? - Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: heartbreak love sadness depressing
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Darker than Moonlight - 09/28/2009
- i liked i ^^. excllent job 5/5
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- himeka_08 - 02/23/2009
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wow....
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- only_one_yulia - 02/23/2009
- aww... it's really good ^^
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- Ix-iAnko-xI - 02/02/2009
- wow, love it
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- H e y E s s i e - 12/17/2008
- Awesome! I simply love it! 5/5 smile
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- x kitkatlove - 11/29/2008
- thanks youu :3
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- ThEaZnPuNk - 11/29/2008
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that's really good.
u never show me this one.
*scared cause too many big words* - Report As Spam