crappy your first draft

• Artist: koubi12
• Description: crrrrrapy first draft, made at 4 in the morning. I gave up writing, but a freind urged me to start. also, the guns are like in ultraviolet, they are just there, no holster. (too cowboy for a fallen angel)
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: crappy your first draft

Run.That's all I thought. I quickly looked over my shoulder, which I regret. I saw IT turn the street corner. I ran faster. I grabbed the two revolvers hanging at my side, and emptied the barrels and put them back.the chances I'd hit IT, were 75% a no hit. The bullets obviously missed the target, because if it hit, I'd have known. In a last attempt toward freedom, I crouched down, preparing my bloody wings for a painfull flight. About two feet in the air, my freedom break was shortened by a hand of pure light grabbing my dark bony leg. On my fall, my face smashed into something hard. The last thing I saw was ITs fading face.

Comments

[dedorog]

woah, really good. good descriptiveness. idk if thats a word. lolz. anyways, really good. can u plz read and comment mine???

[Silenced Fatality]

oo woa cool i pictureed it in my mind and with my crappy imagination thats saying somthing good job so reason i pictured dero with the wings but you know about that whee

[Takeo Inslayth]

O_O
Very cool.
I hope there's more.