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"Your...Your a what?!" I said as I looked into his eyes. "I am a Vampire..." I just looked at him. He was a Vampire...Marcelo was a Vampire. "Make me like you..." I said as I kept his gaze. "No..." I looked at him. "Yes Marcelo to where we can live together forever." He shook his head. "MARCELO! Do you want me to get old and die and you will never see me again!" I yelled as the tears filled my eyes. "I can't put this on you." I looked at him. "Why..." I said in almost a whisper. "Because I love you too much to put you threw this pain..." he said as he looked down. I understood... I placed my hand on his. "Marcelo..." I said as I went to kiss him. He just pulled away. "No..." I looked at him with hurt in my eyes. "Why?" I said looking into his eyes for the answer. "Cause...When I kiss you...You will be a Vampire..." I looked at him. "What?" He looked at me. "Being a Vampire is nothing like the movies Julianna. Here...If a Vampire kisses you...then you are a vampire...We can not go out into the sun. That part is true..." I looked at him. "So wait a minute?! Another Woman kissed you?!" I said as I started to get freaked out. "Only to save my life." I roled my eyes and turnned away. I heard him sigh and stand up. "You should be better now...I need to get you home." I heard him say. "NO!" I said as I looked at him. "I just found you and I am NOT about to loose you again Marcelo. I am staying here." I looked at him. "You have to go back Julianna..." I shook my head. "You are Being very childish right now Julianna..." My eyes widdened. Did he say I was being...Childish? I couldn't help it.... "You know Marcelo...How would you feel if I was suppost to be dead and you found out I was a Vampire? You won't stand there and tell me that you would not want to leave me...." He just stared off to the wall. "I will leave Marcelo..." I looked down at my hand as a tear fell ontop of it. "But I never...want to see you again..."
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When I awoke the next mornning, I was in my room on my bed. I looked out my window and there was nothing but rain...more freakin rain. As I stood, I felt as if I had slept three days cause I felt...better. I had energy. When I walked over to my mirrior, there was a white rose laying on the table and a note attached.
"My Dearest Julianna,
If you wish to not see me anymore then...I will not come around.
I am sorry things had to turn out the way they did yesturday. I was scared of what you would say after you found out I was Vampire. And it lead to this. I will still watch over you, but you will not see me...
Love Always, Marcelo."
I looked at the note. He was not going to come around... I closed my eyes as I tried so hard to remember what happen yesturday.I had to remember...When I closed my eyes, I was awoken form my daze at the souds of screams coming from down stairs....
- by Fallen_star_of_Hope |
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- | Submitted on 07/03/2009 |
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- Title: Forever Prt 4
- Artist: Fallen_star_of_Hope
- Description: This is Part Four of Forever
- Date: 07/03/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LeatherCoconut - 07/16/2009
- Um it could be better, use spell check maybe in case of those words like souds, should be sound, simple mistake. Paragraphing and choppy sentences are everywhere, maybe you can change that up abit next time. Other then that, the story is quite interesting. 3/5 rate me please?
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- JInnYenn - 07/05/2009
- Another vampire story, lol......
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- Mrs GreenApple - 07/05/2009
- Long
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