- Title: marks of a hiku
- Artist: pachumli
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Description:
1st hiku; always in the day
the suger plum drops always
waiting to be squashed
hiku 2; our world will end soon
not many people believe
soon our lives will end
thats all my poems - Date: 12/06/2009
- Tags: endofworld
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Madame Joli Rouge - 12/06/2009
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1. What is a hiku my dear sir? Do you by any chance mean "haiku"?
2. You have placed your content in the wrong box. The content goes in the fancy part ABOVE the box named "DESCRIPTION" ^^
Very morbid little poems you have here - too morbid for my taste yet they are up to haiku standards of 5/7/5 syllables ^^ Although the second one doesn't seem to be about nature very much. - Report As Spam
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