Gone

• Artist: bubbl3buds
• Description: Kinda dramatic
• Date: 12/24/2009
• Tags: gone

She took one last breath and stepped off the high cliff, eyes screwed. Yes, she would die for him.
''Heidi!!!''Shouted Lex, but it was to late, she was already gone.

Comments

[StalePinkCupcakes]

You might want to make this a bit longer. If it's suppose to be suspenseful and dramatica, it should be more than just this. Here's some advice: build up the story by explaining rather than jumping straight to the point.