Ten commandments

• Artist: XxPsYcOtIc BuNnYxX
• Description: Disclaimer: I have to put this to tell you all something. THIS STORY IS COMPLETELY FICTIONAL! The only parts of the story that isn't fictional is the chapter titles and a few facts I threw in there. But this story is not religious or anything like that. it's for fun and something interesting to read. So please no be like 'this is totally offensive" it's just fictional and something to read. So please keep an open mind as you read this.
• Date: 03/07/2011
• Tags: fictional fake interesting commandments

Introduction of Htrae
Htrae - pronounced (Huh-tray-eh)

What if, in order for the Earth to exist, there had to be a parallel universe to keep the balance between good and evil. What if there actually was a planet called Htrae, which is just like Earth but the complete opposite. Instead of people having the right of choice, Htrae’s people were perfect. What if the people of Htrae followed the Ten Commandments unlike those on Earth. Every living being honored thy mother and father, no one killed or stole; they all believed in one Higher power, nothing more, nothing less. Everyone rested on Sunday and didn’t lift a finger. There was no envy or lust, greed, gluttony, anger or pride. Everyone was joyful and friendly. No one on Htrae worshiped anything that stood for his or her Great One. They never cursed or used the Higher Power’s name in vain. No one lied or had sex until they were married. What if Htrae was the picture perfect world Earth couldn’t be? Unlike where on Earth, everyone has the choice to choose between whom they want to follow; Htrae does exactly as their told.
If Htrae did not exist, then neither would Earth. What if one day that perfect world turned ugly all because of one boy. What if that perfect world was corrupted and threw the balance on Earth off. Which makes you wonder, can a perfect world really exist?

Comments

[Doctor Socks]

Very creative. C:
I like it ! <3