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Can you see me?
Can you see what I've done?
The blood spewed down the cobble stones,
and stoped at your feet.
Your mind, in a panic,
made you run away from me.
Did you really not want to see?
Can you see the blood on my hands?
It was all for you.
But what's the point of it now.
It's not like I ever mattered to you
but I still love you.
Even though you turned your back on me,
I still love you.
Can you see me?
Even if I'm dead?
Can you see what I've done?
Even though you chose not to look?
Do you still love me?
Because I still love you.
- Title: Bright Red Love
- Artist: x-Tray-x
- Description: A poem I wrote a few years back. Nothing important.
- Date: 09/19/2008
- Tags: bright love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Guardien of the Lost - 08/07/2009
- I really like it and I get it completely.
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- maydaymouse - 07/14/2009
- I like it, and I understand it well. 5/5
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- Kewl guy 922 - 04/28/2009
- 100000000000/5 Great job
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- xXsecret_artistXx - 01/25/2009
- I luuuuuuuuuuuved it! It was awesome and cool. Better than shel silverstien. biggrin
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- mrzblack7 - 01/24/2009
- I LOVE IT!!! lol, overreatcting a bit there but it was good lol
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- XXPosionAngel100XX - 12/27/2008
- Amazing I love it.
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- Blankspace2 - 09/19/2008
- I like it
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