Empty House

• Artist: ll Decay ll
• Description: uhm yeah i wrote this in like 3 minutes of language arts the assignment was to do a poem only 5-lines longs so ya give me some comments and tell me what you think
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: empty house

I sat in our now empty house
Once blue walls, now black
Now holes where windows once sat
I sat in the house wondering how had it happen
I sat in the house asking why had the fire destroyed everything

Comments

[AmaniPhoebe]

it depressing if u think about it. it's one small thing taking something big away from you. there are diffrent way u can think about abstract or realistically

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

For three minutes, I am not impressed,. 1/5.

[Bioku luna]

I think that it is pretty cool I like it

[StrawBeRry_RevolutIOn_oOo]

pretty kewl for 3 mins. 5/5