Describing Christmas

• Artist: darky ii
• Description: This is a poem I wrote on what I think about Christmas. I hope you enjoy I need a little help with my poetry. I also want to be a great poetry writer so any comments of improvment are welcome.
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: describing christmas

Bells
The smells
Holly hung all about
Santa sightings very rare
Under the tree presents galore
You hear, at night nothing but snores
Fine
Pine

Comments

[RiikoxSoushi]

I like it, but I don't get the "Fine Pine" Thing..
anyway, 5/5

[sublime_necromancer]

Ah, this is a very distinct type. I can't remember what type it is...Haiku? Maybe? This is a very good piece. I highly doubt you need help with your poetry writing...you seem to have a good understanding of expression and flow...keep writing! Hope to see more of your poems!